Added on: August 2, 2018

Passing Through
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August 2, 2018
Lightfoot
The thing I mentioned two pages ago and wasn't sure if people noticed or not, was that the first time Grace appeared, it showed that she was naturally blonde. There was a picture in her room of her and Connor, and she wasn't a goth there.

I figure whoever is mind-controlling her isn't concerned with keeping up her appearance, and she's reverted to what she looks like naturally-- until this is resolved.

Comments:

August 2, 2018
moonfixer
I really like the art style you have here. Great job.
August 3, 2018
Lightfoot
Thanks.
August 2, 2018
I've been a fan of yours since the ridiculousness of "Missing Materia", and I hope that you don't take this as an insult to the quality of your excellent work, but the last word balloon in panel five has really odd grammar: "this rock allowed Wildman could turn into an animal".

I suspect it should be "with this rock" or "allowed Wildman to", but either way, your story deserves the best.

Please carry on with the excellence.
August 2, 2018
This is an example of how people really talk when they aren't thinking ahead about what they are going to say.
August 3, 2018
Lightfoot
I'm glad to have you as a reader of my comics. There was actually one or two other typos also mentioned at other places I post the comic too.

I'm not offended at all about someone pointing out a mistake. Someone will mention it eventually, it's better to hear it now than a year from now.

Anything you do often in a rush to meet a deadline, and then combine with not having a second person proof-read (because most pages are finished only minutes before I post them) is a receipt for typos.

I also have the habit of rewriting the word bubbles to contain fewer words and also to use shorter words, because it's easier to shape the bubbles. And doing that a few times can make you lose track of the sentence easily.
August 2, 2018
snuffysam
"Just our everyday lab where we replicate powerful weapons that supervillains used to use. No we do not have security guards."
August 3, 2018
Lightfoot
Maybe these are seen as worthless unless they can duplicate them? They also might have security, but it's hard to keep out a ghost?